Magnolias & copics

I decided to have yet another play with magnolias and copics pens. I just cant seem to get these cards right. not just getting papers right but colouring tooo.
So while at my local craft shop today Fairymoon crafts
I asked Pina one of the parteners to chosse me some papers and a magnolia and I had to come up with a card. Coloring isn't the best, and really need practice with shading.
would love to hear your honest comments on this please.